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同学们大家好,下面教大家如何在雅思写作的图表作文中写出长句子。一共分为7个步骤,详情如下:
一、大家先写出一个简单句,只有主谓结构,即Basic Fact ( subject + verb )
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.
二、添加数词Numbers
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.
三、什么时间?When?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
四、数字是准确的吗?Exactly this number?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
五、添加一个副词Add an adverb
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
六、以名词结构复述Rephrase with a noun
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
现在我们有了一个33个单词的漂亮的长句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS, GOOD LONG SENTENCE~
七、现在我们尝试以名词开头来重写这个句子。Can we begin with a noun?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
改写成:
There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
现在已经37个单词啦!37 words now!我不建议写得更长了,it’s a nice long sentence~
总结:
写长句子时常用的7个步骤Here are the 7 steps we used:
1. Basic Fact
2. Number
3. When?
4. Exactly this number?
5. Add an adverb
6. Rephrase with a noun
7. Can we begin with a noun?